These are really well done, and I really, really love how well these characters translate into your style a lot. You really have their personalities and characters down-pat! I commend you for how well you draw portraits, because you get their character down-pat through their expressions, body language, and you can tell a lot about them, if that makes any sense. xD Plus, I really love how diverse they look! You've gotten a lot better at drawing distinct facial features and details. I really am pleased with how far you've come along!
The colours are bold and crisp, and I love your shading a lot. The textures are well done, too. I really love the smoke emitting from Capulet's cigarette and Helena's plaid shirt and the scarf with the pattern. Clairy looks so, so adorable! She's one of my favourites of The Fallen Roses. Excellent work done on these!!